Feedback: Unit 5

 Hello,

I enjoyed reading the website for information on adulthood conventional medicine regarding symptoms of and treatment for cardiovascular disease. I chose your group’s assignment this week due to my mother’s cardiac issues post-COVID and learned a lot. 

The images, videos and infographics were well placed and aesthetically pleasing. The “introduction” at the beginning of the webpage was well summarized and introduced the reader to what to expect from the page. Though your tone was engaging and helpful for client education, our group had points taken away for first person language such as “you”, so that may be a change worth making. Your use of statistics was done well, especially when you broke it down that “60 million women” equals 44% in the U.S. Statistics are always something that can be misleading, so that perspective was appreciated. 

The group’s explanation of the treatments (both preventatively and retrospectively) was well articulated and will be very helpful information for the general public. The references and citing looked good and I did not notice many grammatical errors.

The part of the webpage I most enjoyed was the link between cardiovascular disease and menopause- I thought that tie in was exceptional as it’s not something I thought about immediately upon hearing the disease your group chose.